Maya ji,
                    Thanks for your  encouraging words......with regards...yash

Rajee ji ,
                    Thanks for your  wonderful comments and recommendation...However i could not get your last  line...Happy Journey to  Pathankot?...With regards.....yash

Thanks dear Meera  for your  wonderful comments..and I  am not aspiring to win as you know my role  and expectations from this  contest......with regards...yash

Thanks dear poetess for your  wonderful comments...with regards...yash

Wow Great, a wonderful poem

MayaAnil

What is this world made of?
 If not glass, if not stone;
 It is my turn to scoff--
At the truth hidden in the dome! , 



 WISH YOU A HAPPY  Journey to pathankot. regadrs.

Yashji.. Wow.. lovely poem!
"enough is enough, no more I am slave
No more tears,no more sighs and cries,
Tired of your deeds I want to fly!"
These lines are so good! How do u do it  Yashji! I am amazed! Hope u win! All the best Yashji!

Cheers

Meera

I really liked it.Yash...I like the meaning behind every word.. you capture the picture very well.. and you ended it perfectly

Chanchal ji,
                       Thanks  for your comments..with regards..yash

A Winner

Chanchal