Internet, the world of fantasy (Express Yoursel Contest week # 24)

May 22 2008  | Views 397 |  Comments  (44)
Even you are across the miles Still I can feel your presence Every where, every time As I see th... Expand

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  DRCELESTINEMD posted 3 mnths ago

fantastic world of internet fantasy!
NICE.
dr john celes



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 3 mnths ago

Dear Yashji,
a poem well written and so relevant to the pic.. goody one...
cheers n love
OS



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

Thanks dear Reffy  for your wonderful comments  ......Have a nice time.....yash



  reflector posted 3 mnths ago

yash,

very nice one..internet the world of fantasy...it is a world of fantasy

reffy



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

Mokesh Bhaiya,

Thanks for your wonderful comments  and recommendation ..thanks for sharing those  lines too....loved them.....Have a nice time.....yash



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

Thanks for your wonderful comments  and recommendation ......Have a nice time.....yash



  Sablu posted 3 mnths ago

Yash Bhaiya,

 

Brilliant compostion by you.  I would say that soul to soul relation is most powerful as your poem has very high theme about feelings of presence.

 

Pesh hai aapke kavita se inspired hokar mujhe kuch lines yaad aagaya

Patang urte hai akaash mein

Dori hai mere haanth mein

Tum kitne bhi dur raho

Tumhara dil hai mere paas mein

 

All the best



  premsaran posted 3 mnths ago

Yash bhayya,

A wonderful poem about  interenet fantasies. The one  who experiences  more  will have  detachment  from this world  and will not feel the distance. Some times  a few   might feel the  distance as   advantagious  while   some  others  might  consider it  as not.  A thought  provoking  blog. I liked the way  you wrote it.....

Prasad 



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

  Thanks dear  Kookie  for your wonderful comments  and recommendation ..I post my poems  in contest blog as  JFF ( Just for fun)..because I am  invisible coordiantror of this contest..so  no question of  winning ...Love from friends like you is enough for me....Have a good day.....yash



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

Chanchal Bhaiya,

                              Thanks for your wonderful comments  and recommendation ..I post my poems  in contest blog as  JFF ( Just for fun)..because I am  invisible coordiantror of this contest..so  no question of  winning ...Love from friends like you is enough for me....Have a good day.....yash





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