
Even you are across the miles
Still I can feel your presence
Every where, every time
As I see the sun setting
I can see you gazing at Sun
As moon smiles among stars
I can see you smiling at moon
I feel touch of your silky hair
In winds coming across the sea
As my fingers dance over keys
To the tune of my heart beats
My key board turns into a piano
Eyes focused on the monitor
Reading instantaneous messages
Flowing between you and me
I long for you, you yearn for me
An invisible cord lies in between
Bringing us on same wave length
Where I can feel your touch
I can even hear your breathe
Carrying me into a new world
Where I can see our souls entwined
Dancing like colorful clouds
I love this world of fantasy
This poem written for Dr.Madhvi's contest.... Express Yourself Contest week # 24
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fantastic world of internet fantasy!
NICE.
dr john celes
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Dear Yashji,
a poem well written and so relevant to the pic.. goody one...
cheers n love
OS
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Thanks dear Reffy for your wonderful comments ......Have a nice time.....yash
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yash,
very nice one..internet the world of fantasy...it is a world of fantasy
reffy
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Mokesh Bhaiya,
Thanks for your wonderful comments and recommendation ..thanks for sharing those lines too....loved them.....Have a nice time.....yash
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Thanks for your wonderful comments and recommendation ......Have a nice time.....yash
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Yash Bhaiya,
Brilliant compostion by you. I would say that soul to soul relation is most powerful as your poem has very high theme about feelings of presence.
Pesh hai aapke kavita se inspired hokar mujhe kuch lines yaad aagaya
Patang urte hai akaash mein
Dori hai mere haanth mein
Tum kitne bhi dur raho
Tumhara dil hai mere paas mein
All the best
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Yash bhayya,
A wonderful poem about interenet fantasies. The one who experiences more will have detachment from this world and will not feel the distance. Some times a few might feel the distance as advantagious while some others might consider it as not. A thought provoking blog. I liked the way you wrote it.....
Prasad
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Thanks dear Kookie for your wonderful comments and recommendation ..I post my poems in contest blog as JFF ( Just for fun)
..because I am invisible coordiantror of this contest..so no question of winning
...Love from friends like you is enough for me
....Have a good day.....yash
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Chanchal Bhaiya,
..because I am invisible coordiantror of this contest..so no question of winning
...Love from friends like you is enough for me
....Have a good day.....yash
Thanks for your wonderful comments and recommendation ..I post my poems in contest blog as JFF ( Just for fun)
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